You jump cheerfully.
See!.
Your destination gate has been seen.
The top of the gate popped up beautifully in your eyes.
Oh, look!
Clouds circled the fence.
Green trees line the road.
Oh, how beautiful!
You’re so happy
You almost achieved your goal with glitter.
But you fell!
Suddenly you fall.
Then a whirl of movement,
mix of color and dust,
take you disappear.
Steer clear of the gate of your destination.
Where are the trees?
Where are the soft clouds?
Where is the high gate?
You cry.
Then you get up.
Determined to start the journey
reach the gate,
again.
This time don’t fail!
And if you stumble,
get up again.
Keep smiling.
The gate will always be there for you.

So true, always π
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yeah!
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Encouraging words
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Thanks!
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Nice motivational post!!
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I hope my words can motivate youπ€©
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ππ
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Great post!
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Thank uπ€
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Motivating and beautiful π
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Such beautiful imagery. β€
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Thank uπ€
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Falling down has great purpose. Each time you do it builds greater wisdom, greater understanding, and finally a very great love. The one we have avoided all our lives through fear…our love.
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yeah! I agree with you. Thanks for dropping ur comment hereπ€
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Lovely poem !ππ
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thanks!
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You’re welcome dear !ππ
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True. It is not in stumbling that one is judged. It is in oneβs being able to get up or not , that is what counts.
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I agree with you! Thank you for sharing your opinion π€
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Good morning ma’am,
Thank you for this poem. A very well written and motivational post.
I would be very glad if you review my articles on Wonder.
Thank you for your time ma’am.
Best wishes for your writing journey.
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urwell dearr.
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